Category: Writing

I’m submitting a package for a program that I am trying to apply. There is a Q&A portion in the application; I have already answered it but I don’t think the structure of my answer is not at a college or professional level of writing. Could you please check my answers and edit them in a more professional structure? attached are the answers I have written. 

Provide feedback to two of your peers by completing the Peer Review Memo and attaching it to your peer’s discussion post by 11:59 pm CST Sunday. 
I have attracted a document of the Peer Review Memo in the order dropbox 

1- In our last discussion session, Professor Monroy expressed distaste for which aspect of video streaming services?
A.ads
B.poor video quality
C.expensive subscription fees
D. limited library options
2- In our penultimate discussion session, a student expressed surprise that you could connect ________ to a modern TV set… and that it works as intended.

For your final project, you will incorporate everything we have covered this semester and apply to yourself. You will need to come up with a finance plan for the purchase of your next property. Make sure to include details from the entire semester.
Things to include…..
Type of property structure (Single Family, Condo, Units, etc.)
Type of Financing (conventional, FHA, VA, etc.)
Down payment and closing cost requirements
Type of loan program
How did you determine the lender you will use (credit union, broker, banker, bank, etc.)
Details about the property type and it’s qualifications (value, condition, etc.)
What will the process look like from beginning to end.
How will this impact you long term financially.
You can use actual goals, or just “pretend” for the purposes of the assignment.
This should be no less than 1 page and cover all of the items above in detail.

Poetry thematic analysis
Poetry analysis involves analyzing the language and figures of speech used by a poet. It also
entails sharing personal views regarding the poem and breaking down the poetic techniques,
including its form, structure and themes.
Introduction:
This can include background information and interesting facts or trivia regarding the poem or
author. State the thesis and the poems you have chosen, explaining how their themes are
similar and what you will write in your essay to prove this.
Body of the essay:
Use the present tense to describe and analyze the events and characters of the story and how
they demonstrate different themes.
Enhance your analysis with direct quotations from the poem. When mentioning a particular
poetic device or a situation from the poem’s plot, prove your words with the quote that refers to
it or uses the device you are analyzing.
Conclusion:
The conclusion should summaries the points you made which identified the poems’ themes.
**Select two or more poems that you believe have similar themes. Your thesis is to show
the reader how these poems point to this particular theme. Use the text of the poem itself as
evidence to support your thesis.
Document all sources using the MLA guidelines.

attached alianza’s one pager
this essay will be needed to be about a positive view about all the opportunities like traveling for work, network, trust younger generations to fundraise, lead programs, public speaking, and work in politics. as a young latina it is hard to have the society trust me to do my job and WHAT I STUDIED FOR but Alianza open a door where I can improve, learn and expand my skills to grow in my community. (you can add this) I am a policy and legislative manager, my duties are more than analyzing policies, public speaking at government meetings, networking but FUNDRAISE, YOUTH SUMMITS, TRAVEL TO REPRESENT THE SENIOR TEAM AND MORE. however the best thing is to be an inspiration to my colleagues that Everything is possible.

Written Assignment 5 will give you an opportunity to practice what you have learned about the cognitive biases all of us have–and how to work through them.
Your topic is going to be screen addiction. Next, find an article or opinion essay on your topic from a reputable online source. Your task is to find an article or essay that challenges your thinking on the topic in some way because the goal for this assignment is for you to challenge your biases.
In a short response essay of approximately 600 to 800 words, explore the biases you have on this issue using the following essay structure as your guide.
First, in a short introduction, share the article you chose, how you found it, and why you chose it. Then, in your body paragraphs, respond to the following questions:
What did you already think about this topic before reading the article?
Where did you get that information? Tell the story of how you came to think what you think about this controversial issue.
How do your experiences align with or disconnect from the point of view presented in the article? What about the article challenged your current beliefs?
Finally, try to put yourself into someone else’s shoes who might disagree with you on this issue. What might they say about this issue? What points might they make that seem the most reasonable to you, even if you still disagree with them? Don’t bring it back to your side. Just summarize what you think the other side might think. In this way, you will be forced to consider that side without feeling an urge to disagree with it.
In your conclusion, reflect on the process of digging into these tough questions. What are some of the benefits of this kind of process? Be sure to provide an APA reference for your chosen article at the end of your response essay.

Choose an Aviation Ethical Dilemma and make sure you cover all angles of the issue. Include history of the ethical issue or issues, what laws or regulatory rules may have been broken, or what laws protect against such unethical behavior/s.
Think about things like ethics in aviation safety, ethics of pilots, airport administrators, air traffic controllers, mechanics, ramp workers, baggage handlers and many others, not limited to politicians with a stake in aviation, cities and municipalities with airports on them, and what about unethical behavior by airports themselves perhaps such as too many not climate friendly emissions, oil and fuel spills, flight attendants, passengers being unethical.

A statement demonstrating commitment to and interest in literacy education as well as an ability to write clearly and well (submitted online with application).
Respond to the following questions:
a. What does it mean to be literate in the 21st century?
b. Share your experiences as a reader and writer. How does this inform your teaching of reading and writing?
c. Why is SUNY Cortland’s online asynchronous literacy program a good fit for you, and how will this literacy specialist degree support your long-term professional goals?
Format directions:
Essay should be: typed, double-spaced, 10-12 point font size, preferable font Times New Roman or similar font, two or more pages, at least one inch margins, all three questions/statements must be clearly addressed. Failure to observe format directions will automatically disqualify the essay.
The statement will be evaluated in the following areas:
a. Clarity of ideas
b. Depth of content
c. Organization
d. Writing conventions
My info to enter:
Part B: 
I did have a passion for writing when I was younger, l used to write creative stories all the time. Online too. As I’ve gotten older I kind of fell out of writing but I still remember that excitement I used to get when my teacher would tell us we were doing a creative writing project. For reading, I have always loved to read. As a child I struggled with reading and went to reading class for a little bit. I love how reading will take you to another world and I love the fantasy that reading brings. I used to go to the library as a child and check out a bunch of books every few weeks or so. Reading is a passion I still have to this day. 
Part C:
The program would benefit me because I am currently a teacher and this program allows me to keep doing the job I love while going to school to further my career and my knowledge about teaching. The program would benefit my goals because I have been hearing from my colleagues how COVID really impaired a lot of students literacy and are below level in reading and literacy. In my career, I want my students to have the
opportunity to find the love of reading for themselves like I did when I was around their age.
Having this degree would allow me to have knowledge of how to teach children to read and also benefit my educator career because it makes me more informed and able to teach kids to the extent they deserve. I would love to be able to bring the passion for reading and writing that I had at their age and give it to them and this program would only help me to do that.

A detailed outline of how to present and organize ideas. Outline should include the purpose and Thesis. 2-4 pages. 
1. include thesis “Regular physical activity yields profound mental health benefits, as evidenced by extensive research showing exercise can alleviate symptons of depression, anxiety, and other psychological conditions while also preventing the onset of such disorders.”