Category: Creative writing

Revisions to essay (written by another writer on this platform) to fall in line with outline with comments from professor regarding previously written essays from semester.

The Secret Room: A hidden room in an old house holds clues to a long-forgotten family 
secret, waiting to be uncovered by the right person.

Research paper (7-10 pages, 5-7 sources, at least 1 should be a text we cover in class) Outline + thesis statement – please provide an outline of your research paper, including a clearly defined working thesis. Provide a topic sentence/bulletpoint list of what you will argue in each paragraph (there should be 5-6).
original, and interesting thesis on the basis of textual and contextual evidence. You will correctly cite and meaningfully (i.e. in a way that moves your paper along) discuss your sources in a way that supports your argument.
THESIS STATEMENT: Option 1 “Social media platforms wield significant influence on gender perceptions and behaviors, shaping cultural norms, self-identity construction, and societal expectations, thereby perpetuating both traditional and evolving gender roles.”
Option 2 “Even while social media can be entertaining and educational, teens should set time limitations for their usage of it because it doesn’t always present an intellectual challenge, hinders social connection, contributes to anxiety and melancholy, and evokes negative feelings rather than positive ones.”
Also use the book Calvin Kasulke “Several People are Typing” https://learn-us-east-1-prod-fleet02-xythos.content.blackboardcdn.com/61aab133e7df2/123952483?X-Blackboard-S3-Bucket=learn-us-east-1-prod-fleet01-xythos&X-Blackboard-Expiration=1715104800000&X-Blackboard-Signature=PDxAv56V9x4iCLelO81lD76wuxfRDZ4Mhli8oJnrluE%3D&X-Blackboard-Client-Id=100211&X-Blackboard-S3-Region=us-east-1&response-cache-control=private%2C%20max-age%3D21600&response-content-disposition=inline%3B%20filename%2A%3DUTF-8%27%27Several%2520People%2520Are%2520Typing%2520A%2520Novel%2520%2528Calvin%2520Kasulke%2529%2520%2528z-lib.org%2529.pdf&response-content-type=application%2Fpdf&X-Amz-Security-Token=IQoJb3JpZ2luX2VjEH8aCXVzLWVhc3QtMSJGMEQCIH%2F2pwhaK%2BDrz%2Fwpm97xTWyrr44PnHWovLpNbkMEKOUmAiA6Jvi7lAExNtiCpOK%2Ba40dpHl6M3qTQZAl7HaPJAxAqiq9BQjX%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F8BEAQaDDYzNTU2NzkyNDE4MyIMY9Y2E4vN0d0rGEFAKpEF0QwmOAOBRMHasIhhxQwQzTrPKUviK8GOCxg5Lnd%2BK2%2BNvV6F%2B4O0vXFZuFTooEsaQeIp1T25pCE9t2Vs8QkzorbAvKnzX2cF43C%2B4P6MibR8Q5N1i3UH5rEqQH18%2BIxGyni8XuFNmEKjDAFkEC3hFBmgZ2Cl5DRfJsc9vcRYJzV4nIn5VOrwOeWAKmim8jgnOkD8SJU9vshnhnyKPlFnVROYtGkhgxPZiaw6ph6f%2FcbVwXgKrcD9YAvl%2F%2B4VZT%2Bguth1F77lJRkYKTdmKgsWL96q59J879B3Z2G8Xkfl5wD7mkANHRO2p4OgDOsppD3YGf7a1bEtHRLuEEJzkHJCLL6fOewdCw4lbdcqWmShRc4%2B%2FQDi92bBdhStRP1AkHMz4GIgSyahmH2yzr2U5ei6iBWzK%2FNnARCE3VHOR32QuglYiZAV%2B4c2ARpriNgtiSQAjvxXVU6LB8dfLUudaCAWBtN6mgMoqVlJ52sl1Q0bZv3xQL44dXb0qK%2FMYi5tbO1UOVtU7A8bDB53H5b04WqYOlcyOFYgvspHSqYdmkon7GB7L3ZlrPQqHK1jr4x2fMUIcVbqz9fwekYfW9I7xtgvp33wYe%2BVHI%2BCYbQxluHCqhMCjR21yrfZebUjFoS1JRhuMWwEt3ndDEvN%2F4C8VFbXhMDzjA%2FmENXfa5RkkbAun6dmOUunuktULaWdwMY%2BECK%2BjRLBmtih0U9GaPx10FFnIDY5pn%2B%2BgvvOcy7dTuJKnhBn3kia8x0SPEJQZSJjSSlQ7cksHBRWZyyk17IT0SsxuaGq%2Bl6mMEDdErhzyJFyuD0st0piFi7bwyi5t87CEnylr6HKKMqofG3YbstANrrATsNAcWdngTDoYEwRP6kLuC%2FMMJns6LEGOrIB%2Bqp1O%2FvfuJ4ggtaSzt%2F%2FoMnnn%2Bg3uQWid4ENIS7xd6bUh%2BWimAr72n%2B%2Fp%2BtMpNxKFMS3DLhrxNlcUyMFxE%2FzREfvm0EUKgzl2P%2Fv9%2FVYU4ElANOAfQsB89ge8FCQARICCUBN6gx%2FV95Q5hksnBfKSDv1Ba6q9VzS5AZOPm0K%2FfwUfcYCIKVcbsMRZCtKwAW7d%2Bocgw%2B%2FQBFoSNVwLgWfFGDfmVSjmyDHShsjjPYxVHmn0w%3D%3D&X-Amz-Algorithm=AWS4-HMAC-SHA256&X-Amz-Date=20240507T120000Z&X-Amz-SignedHeaders=host&X-Amz-Expires=21600&X-Amz-Credential=ASIAZH6WM4PLZEC7DIQV%2F20240507%2Fus-east-1%2Fs3%2Faws4_request&X-Amz-Signature=84d624914d98c2f2b7277b842a50584c8f23dc825d35e577817cb58a596a0f50

All I need from this essay is for you to correct some of the parts . For example you need to describe how Ricky looks and his personality. Second thing is that there needs to be dialogue between the mom and Ricky and she needs to be described as well. There also has to be dialogue between Ricky and his mom (try to come up with a name for the mom ) and finally try to also describe the lady from the store he’s robbing (there also has to be dialogue between them ) . And the last thing is too not use a lot of advanced words .

The practical portfolio is an exercise in creative writing. For this assignment, create a short story (1-3 pages of text), a poem (1-2 pages of text), and a brief play with a minimum of 1 act and 1 scene (1-3 pages of text). Use Times New Roman font and double spacing for the short story and the play. Your poem does not need to be double-spaced. Take creative freedom with your spacing for the poem. You can write about anything you want for each creative exercise. Use correct grammar and spelling unless you are trying to deliberately show dialect in your text.
Your story, poem, and play should each have a clearly labeled title, center-aligned above the first sentence of each exercise. Upload your portfolio as a single Word doc file.  

see file attached for instructions
follow the story there  as an example and write a 800 reflective piece about my experience.

Use both the Family History Draft doxc and the Annotated version pdf to help rewrite my paper. On both of these files there is feeback from my professor. There is also a rubic to help follow along top make sure I reached all my requirements. Make sure this paper stays between 9-10 pages NO LONGER!  
-For the Annotated version click the highlighted marks for Professor annotations 
-For the History Draft scroll down to the bottom and thats where the Professor comments are left

1- It is a snapshot of  something that really happened to you. Your secrets are safe with me!  You can write about whatever  topic that you want.  Nothing is off limits. 
2-Your paper can be on something funny, a drama, a tragedy, a comedy, or a tragic -comedy. 
3-One story 
4-additinal instruction video

Create a 25-page essay talking about how teachers implement methods and strategies in their classroom to create a safe space for lgbtq students. Use the articles in the outline. Please also modify the outline attached. Make sure to use in-text citations and references.

attached is the instructions, including the short story and poem. please read directions carefully. and below is the feedback to the poem and short story. poem: 1. What imagery or lines in this poem are the most powerful to you?
The lines that are most powerful to me in this poem is,
“Here, within this holy inner part is where I feel totally rejuvenated.
I am my happiest when I am alone.
And the murmur of my thoughts seem to wane.
Moreover, I rekindle a sense of determination.”
This stuck out to me because of how much this expresses the peace the narrator feels alone. This gives the audience a look into how at-peace the narrator is with themselves as a person and a soul. It is very powerful and conveys self-love and confidence. 2. What imagery or lines in this poem are the least powerful to you?
The line that was the least powerful to me was,
“However, the sound of the town slowly starts to deminish.”
This line was the least powerful because it just seemed like it was an add-on to the stanza. In the first stanza, the comparison between the bustle and loudness of the city to how the narrator escapes to their inner self to get away from that, already suggests that the sounds have began to deminish. 3. Do you see any particular rhyme scheme (this will probably be the shortest answer)?
There seems to be no specific rhyme scheme or pattern to this poem, which illustrates how flowy the poem is, as the narrator seems to just speak their mind.
4. Are any parts of this poem confusing?
There were no confusing parts of this poem, as the message of being at peace with oneself and escaping to the mind to get away from the chaos was deepy conveyed. 5. What suggestion can you provide for improvement on this poem? (You MUST suggest something. ALL drafts can be changed somehow, even if just for experimentation.)
The only thing I believe should be changed is the line at the end of stanza two. The beginning of the poem already suggests that the sound of the city is silenced as the narrator dives into their thoughts. The only thing that I would suggest instead is maybe a few more lines on just how silent and free the narrator feels within their own presence and thoughts short story: The narrative centers on Thomas, who, upon finding an antiquated key and a cryptic note in his grandmother’s attic, is drawn into the enigmatic depths of a moonlit forest. This key is the gateway to a secret nestled within a venerable greenhouse, unveiling a mesmerizing tableau of his grandparents’ cherished recollections. This tale is an odyssey of self-discovery, delving into the ethereal nature of familial ties. As the story states, “Thomas was filled with the sounds and images of the past,” highlighting the central theme of memory and connection.
The narrative’s most compelling aspect is the lucid portrayal of the greenhouse and its enchanting metamorphosis. The depiction of the rose bush, bathed in the glow of the key’s enchantment, is especially evocative: “One rose bush was highlighted… shining as the spell touched it.” This moment captures the enchantment of the setting and the emotional depth of Thomas’s experience, making it a memorable and impactful part of the narrative.
Conversely, the narrative’s potential shortcomings include the scant development of Thomas’s persona and the story’s succinctness. Despite the richly detailed magical elements, Thomas remains an enigma, defined solely by his actions. Furthermore, the redundancy in the concluding segment may be perceived as superfluous, failing to contribute fresh insights or emotional depth to the narrative.
To elevate the story, enriching Thomas’s character would instill greater depth and engage the reader’s empathy. Introducing dilemmas or hurdles could infuse the tale with suspense and vigor. For example, Thomas might grapple with the choice between lingering in the beguiling past or confronting the starkness of reality. Additionally, honing the narrative to eradicate redundancy and enhance coherence would bolster its readability and emotive impact.