My teacher asked me to rewrite the essay based on these instructions in Chicago Style.
Instructions
Your script offers a good descriptive summary of street markets in London (not sure
all those you mention can be called “flea markets” though) and points at some of
the challenges for keeping them alive within the complexity of urban change. The
problem of the script is that it is excessively descriptive and does not provide
enough evidence as to how the references that you list at the end have been used
in the text. Those references should appear in the form of footnotes at relevant
points in the text; at the same time, it is not only a matter of scattering some
footnotes around but to summarise and comment on specific points that are made
in the texts. For example: what do we learn from Jan Gehl and how can that be
applied to what you can observe in a London street market?
It is important to reflect on the relation between the text and the film and how one
builds on the other – and which one builds on which, something that is not wholly
clear in your submission. Usually, a written script is turned into a film; yet you could
also do the opposite: you have some footage (the one you have produced) and you
extract a text/narrative from it. This would imply close readings of things that
happen in the film and that would also allow you to go beyond the overall feeling of
praise of every single aspect of a street market that emerges from your text: aren’t
markets also difficult places? Isn’t there any criticality to be considered? While not
having to aim for a negative viewpoint, your analysis would definitely benefit from a
more critical observation of what is in front of your camera.
You should re-work and re-submit the text (without re-working the film), which you
can do in a few different ways. One is a simple revisiting of it by means of adding
references where necessary in the text. This should be done as suggested above,
that is, not merely adding a few footnotes that provide the title of a text but
articulating some thoughts about the specific sources you are using. So, this would
imply re-writing some sections of your text to embed the sources clearly. The result
would be still within the realm of a somewhat canonical essay in terms of writing
format and style. A second way of re-working the text is to re-write it (almost)
completely by following the suggestion given above of starting from the film and
extracting observations from it (no problem if the market shown in the film is
different from the ones you are writing about: you can still find in it examples of
social practices that apply to many different locations). This would imply taking
decisions as to who is writing/speaking (a vendor, a visitor, some specific objects in
the market, etc.? You should choose one and keep it consistent) as well as trying to
write a bit differently from a canonical essay (which in part you are already doing by
using the first person).
Overall, your text is not on the edge of a low pass and for this reason, as long as
you revisit it along the lines suggested above and aim for clearer reference to the
bibliography and some more critical analysis.
Author: admin
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The Survival of London’s Street Markets: A Critical Analysis in Chicago Style
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Title: Exploring Health Impediments to Academic Performance in College Students: Reflection and Analysis
Exercise Content
For this week’s assignment, reflect on the following health impediments to academic performance and check out the National College Health Assessment findings (particularly Section D- Impediments to Academic Performance.)
After reviewing these, answer the below reflection questions:
Did your understanding of college students’ primary wellness challenges align with real-world application?
What specific variances did you notice between your expectations and the actual situation?
How do external factors shape your understanding of wellness challenges impacting college students’ academic performance?
Among the reasons listed, which one caught you off guard? How might this unexpected factor uniquely impact college students?
Note: All written assignments should be supported by research and cited/formatted in the proper APA 7th edition. -
Title: Reflection on a Personal Crisis: Lessons Learned and What I Would Do Differently
Chapter 2 discusses the following : normal developmental crises, situational crises and existential crises.
Students should refer to the textbook for the definitions and examples of each and then think about a time that they encountered one of these crises in their own lives. Keeping in mind that the crisis produced an abnormal response from you. The crisis should be in the distant past.
Students are to provide a reflection paper, not to exceed two pages, which addresses all of the following based on the crises chosen:
Think back to that time and ask yourself, “Looking back on the crisis, how does it now appear different than it was immediately after it happened?”
How did you handle the crisis at the time? Thinking about what was done.
Thinking about the crisis, what did and didn’t work, and what you think about it now.
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Title: “Ensuring Safe and Efficient Hydrogen Production: A Review of HAZID Analysis for Solid-State Electrolysis”
this Literature Review on “HAZID Analysis of Hydrogen Production via Solid-State Electrolysis”
on safey & Process Engineering.
No AI or Chatgpt. and Instructions ar attached. -
Title: “The JFK Assassination: A Government Conspiracy to Silence Opposition to the Vietnam War”
An reasearch argumentative essay about jfk assasination being carried out by his over government /cia because he didn’t wanna get involved in the Vietnam war I also need a 5 sourced bibliography in mla format with these sources
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“Utilizing AI Tools in Technical Writing: A Formal Research Report”
I am a college freshman taking a technical writing course.
You may use generative AI tools like ChatGPT in this course. Append a statement that identifies the AI tool you have
used and how you used it. Be sure that your use of AI is not preventig you from using your independent writing
skills. Please limit the usage to as little as possible.
Write a formal research report in Word that contains the following
-Title Page
– Space for a Letter of transmittal (I will be writing this myself)
-Table of Contents
-Table of Figures
-Informative Abstract
-Appropriate and Consistent system of headings
-At least one graph or chart (optional, I am capable of doing this myself if needed)
-At least one table (optional, I am capable of doing this myself if needed)
-Glossary (If needed)
-Appendices (Optional, if desired)
-List of references
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Title: The Rise of Arbitration and the Debate over Banning Arbitration Clauses in the US
What factors do you think explain the growth of arbitration as an alternative to litigation in the US?
Imagine that you work for a member of Congress, who is preparing a bill that would ban all arbitration clauses in certain areas, particularly for consumer contracts and employment agreements. The member of Congress seeks your input into the legislation. Would you support such a ban? Why or why not? -
Executive Summary: Analysis of Welfare and Social Security Policy Vision, Mission, and Goals: The welfare and social security policy aims to provide financial assistance and support to individuals and families in need, with the ultimate goal of reducing poverty and promoting social equality
Revert back to order number 7529526 Powerpoint. My policy is welfare and social security.
Background: You have carefully
crafted an extensive presentation about the policy you have targeted for
analysis. You have supplied your stakeholders with the information they need to
make an informed decision. You must provide them with material they can take to
review. You decide to prepare a report that compliments your presentation.
To begin, provide an
executive summary, in APA format, for the policy you are analyzing.
STEP 1: Write a succinct
525-to-700-word narrative that outlines what you have found to be attached to
the policy you are analyzing.
Provide the following:
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Vision,
Mission, and Goals statements
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Money:
How was the policy funded?
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What
other social arenas benefited from this allocation?
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What
other social arenas have suffered?
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Message:
How was this policy introduced? How was progress communicated?
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From
whom did they seek advice?
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Which
stakeholders were not involved?
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Momentum:
What conflicts and divisions have risen from the inception of this policy?
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What
areas of civil rights have been affected?
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Supported?
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Harmed?
STEP 2: Cite a minimum of 3
peer-reviewed or similar references to support your assignment.
STEP 3: Include an APA-formatted reference
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Title: The Impact of Organic Compounds on Human Health, Society, and the Environment: A Comprehensive Assessment and Personal Action Plan
Choose one of the above methods of presentation to:
(a) assess the impact on human health, society and the environment of organic compounds
used in everyday life
OR
(b) propose a personal course of action to reduce the use of compounds that are harmful to human health and the environment
Chose making a report for all the aspects of the units which are 5