Title: Peer Review of Thesis Draft: “Exploring the Impact of Social Media on Teenagers’ Mental Health” Strengths: 1. Clear and concise research question: The thesis draft clearly states the research question, which is to explore the impact

Peer Review of this thesis draft, only including until the methodology part. 
– Include Strengths, Weeknesses, Main criticisms and suggestions for improvement, comments regarding formalities and closing remarks and recommendations
– reference the writers 
– specficy in which sections/pages when discussing a specific part