“Revisions to Doctor’s Notes for Thesis Proposal: Ensuring Proper Inclusion of Literature and Research Gap Analysis”

follow and Edit the attached notes from the doctor and write them in the appropriate form, taking into account the number of words required in each part in file 2
Amend it in file 1 Edit in the application that will be submitted to the colleg acceptance file 2
Any action you modify in File 1 must be modified in File 2 if it is necessary
doctor note
I have taken note of the following observations:
1. In section 3.1 of your thesis, please ensure that you write about qualitative research and mention that you will be interviewing HR professionals in Australia. Discuss semi-structured interviews and show how you will reach the interviewees. For secondary data-based research, you may write a conceptual paper which will be a part of your literature review chapter and not the whole thesis.
2. It is important to include relevant literature to support your arguments. Without it, your arguments may seem superficial and opinionated. So, go through the proposal and ensure all your arguments are referenced properly.
3. In section 3.1.1, please add literature and clearly show the gap in research. Explain what led you to this gap and the implications of exploring it. It is crucial to cite studies from ABDC (FT50, A*, and A) journals only.
for File 2
4. Please ensure that all the references in the reference list are cited in the text. You have cited only 4-5 references but listed 12 in your reference list. All references must be from top-rated journals.