“The Importance of Citing Sources in Academic Writing” The Importance of Citing Sources in Academic Writing Citing sources is an essential aspect of academic writing. It involves acknowledging and giving credit to the original sources of information used in a paper or assignment

Great start – you need to review my comments and to  cite more often.  At the beginning of a paragraph is good but when you make statements you should do it at the end as well so you make sure that you have given full credit to the author
References need to be formatted in APA 7th edition