“Improving Research Methods and Results in Health Care Management: Incorporating Feedback and Expert Advice”

I’m attaching first the feedback from the methods as as well as two links and me emailing my professor and him responding back “Advice”. The rest of the links should still be on the last order. 
https://libguides.lib.siu.edu/health_care_management 
These links are for Results
https://www.jclinepi.com/article/S0895-4356(13)00129-7/pdf
https://www.grammarly.com/grammar-check
Please look at all links