“Exploring the Effects of Social Media on Mental Health: The Impact of Comparison and Self-Esteem” Body Paragraph Draft: One of the most detrimental effects of social media on mental health is the constant comparison to others that it promotes. According

Week
6 Topic 2: Body Paragraph Peer Review
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In this
discussion, you will share a draft of one of your body
paragraphs.  You will also give and receive feedback from your
classmates.
Post a draft of one of your body paragraphs. Be sure that
your body paragraph includes a clear point that is supported by appropriate
details, along with information and ideas from the course readings. Don’t
forget to engage with a source in your paragraph. Refer to “Writing Your
Body Paragraphs” in this week’s learning resources for tips and
sample body paragraphs. Also be sure to demonstrate pronoun-antecedent
agreement and the grammar skills covered in previous weeks in your writing.