“Improving the Problem Statement and Methodology in the Prospectus: Criterion Feedback”

Criterion Feedback
Previous feedback.
A problem statement must have both a background as well as an academic citation.
Why is it a problem ‘practical leadership is a cornerstone’?
What is the consequence?
Previous feedback: The worksheet from Week 6 should be used. Similar to the Problem Statement, purpose has specific elements. These are not demonstrated in this section.
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Unable to determine method? Both qualitative and quantitative were mentioned but neither was developed enough to support this section.
The student did not write 1 paragraph in section 4 of the prospectus to justify why the methodology is appropriate
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No design chosen
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The research questions are not developed. It is difficult to establish alignment without a viable problem statement
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see APA Notes in paper
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While some sections were more developed, other sections were not developed or were not clear. Please see specific notes in paper.
Feedback
Thomas,
Thank you for your submission; however, this paper does not include previous feedback or meet most of the requirements for this week. Additionally, the method and design are not clear. Please review notes in each section.
Feedback is provided each week with the expectation it is implemented. Please review the CDS Dissertation Guide for additional information.