“Analyzing Malcolm X’s Use of Rhetorical Devices in ‘The Ballot or the Bullet’ Speech”

http://www.edchange.org/multicultural/speeches/malcolm_x_ballot.html
Based on this speech
Here is a piece of my speech reaction to an assignment that I will attach. You can put that in if it helps. 
Also, I submitted my thesis statement that needs to be graded.You can let me know if you can come up with a better thesis statement.  “In this speech, Malcolm X bases his argument on the rhetorical devices of pathos, logos, and ethos.”