Title: “Challenging Traditional Notions: An Analysis of Early Flight in Cinema”

The thesis is almost there. The aspect that the thesis is missing is specifically what you mean by how the film challenges traditional notions – you want the reader to fully understand exactly how you think this film challenges traditional notions/conventions (and which conventions) as part of the thesis. Also, do quote from at least two of the “Readings” sources (Encyclopedia of early cinema and Taking to the Air: Early Film and Early Flight).