“Refining Research Design and Methodology: Strengthening the Scope and Structure for a Comprehensive Study”

You had a good strat on preparing this draft, but your scope and structure is not clrear and is too broad.
You did a good job finding some useful and relavant sources, but you must continue reading the literature to solidify your research design and method. Your research design and methodology need to be reviewed and revised extensively.
You had a good strat on preparing this bibliography, but your scope and structure is not clrear and it is still too broad.