“From Biology to Psychology: My Journey and Passion for Understanding and Helping Others” As a medical assistant and ophthalmic technician, I have been fortunate to witness the intricate workings of the human body and the impact of illness on individuals. My

Can you please help me rewrite this and feel free to make changes. I really want to get accepted into this program and I need a personal statement indicating my interest in psychology being influenced by my professional experience (medical assistant and ophthalmic technician) also my academic journey in the sciences. I am currently graduating with my BA in Biology but I want to pursue a career in psychology because I enjoy mentoring and understanding, in addition to helping individuals with coping mechanisms.
Thank you.
The instructions: Write then upload a Personal Statement (500-700 words) that addresses your personal motivation for applying to the program, what you want to accomplish, and why this matters. Statements should demonstrate clarity of expression, capacity for complex thought, writing skills commensurate with this level of study, and a developed rationale for wanting to pursue this field of study.