“Uncovering the Roots of My Family History: A Revised Exploration”

Use both the Family History Draft doxc and the Annotated version pdf to help rewrite my paper. On both of these files there is feeback from my professor. There is also a rubic to help follow along top make sure I reached all my requirements. Make sure this paper stays between 9-10 pages NO LONGER!  
-For the Annotated version click the highlighted marks for Professor annotations 
-For the History Draft scroll down to the bottom and thats where the Professor comments are left