Title: “Fashion as a Catalyst for Social Change: The Power of Clothing in Shaping Society”

Edit rough draft. I need in text citations from the source in the essay. TEACHER FEEDBACK: almost every paragraph begins with a variant of the same phrase, “fashion can be a powerful tool for social change”, and there is a lot of repetition in content and few citations. I’d like to invite you to resubmit with no penalty if that’s the case. You’ve been very active in class and I know you’re passionate about this topic so I’d love to see your final product!