Title: Editing Based on Professor’s Feedback

Hello, I need to edit my paper based on the notes and feedback given back to me from my professors. Please follow the notes exactly and adjust the paper as necessary. I need you to highlight or somehow indicate the changes so i can see the edits. Also, you can find more articles that will help you with the edits. It’s important to put multiple intext citations and when talking about a study, please say what the researchers did in that study then relate it back to my paper. I will provide you with my professors feedback notes. if you have any questions please message me before deciding what to do.