“Deserving of Scholarship: My Dedication to Hard Work and Community Involvement”

Here is the beginning i need some words added on for why I am deserving of this scholarship 
I believe that I deserve this scholarship because I am a very hard worker and an active member within my community. For as long as I remember I have been a member of the St. John the Evangelist Catholic Parish. I have attended many church services and religion classes throughout the years, and even participated in the youth choir. Outside of church I have participated in many clubs and extracurricular activities that have helped shape who I am today. Participating in these activities has helped me discover many character traits and values that I have.